2011/06/16 Dokkyo Writing

  We checked our essay each other with friends and we found mistakes in our essay at the begining of last class.
 We learned a lot about how to write body paragraphs and conclusions. Each body paragraphs need topic sentence, sub topic, details and examples.
Conclusion should
・be sammary of supporting sentence
・enable reader to understand essay.
・repeat most important thing
・no new impformation
・repeat thesis statement different way

We have to follow those rules and make marvelous essays.
My essay is still terrible. It has many mistakes and not logical.
Your explanation is careful and easy to understand, so I'll do as you told.

See you Thursday!